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the diary of a maid

Mary D.Posted by Benjamin S. 28 Apr, 2009 03:17PM

day 3 I have just discovered that the 'darling' children i am looking after are no more than trouble makers, they took half an hour to convince them to get changed into sunday best. I got a thourgh telling off and when i tried to complain, she threatened me with the sack. My family desperately need this money so i just bore the brunt of her anger and hoped not to feel it's full force again.

At dinner the children refused to eat their greens, i feared for my place so i ate them and said to the children to keeep quiet about it and i would eat their greens every other day.

i have got away with it, for now at least!

Posted by Mary D. 05 May, 2009 08:15AM

look at the author not who posted it!

Posted by Georgie Ball 28 Apr, 2009 08:41PM

I'm a little confused as to whose work this is! Is this Ben's or Mary's? Perhaps if it is Ben's he could change it to be under the right category, and if not, perhaps Ben could take it down and let Mary post?

Now to get on with the actual text...
I really really like the story with this. Grammar and spelling aside (no need to worry) I'm really intrigued! Please keep this up, and perhaps develop it all? The idea is fantastic, especially where she eats the greens for them. If there was more detail for each day/event this could turn out to be something really special! Keep it up!
This goes for the next post, which I have also read.