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Here's my newest story hope ya like it :)

C.W. Hewett's TLRPosted by Harley T. 15 Jan, 2010 09:20PM

The Girl In The Fire Place

By Harley Tedds

It was a dark winters evening and everything was quiet a little girl called Annabel was sitting in front of her nanny’s fire-place she heard a voice a strange little girls voice calling her name “Annabel ANNABEL” it got louder the closer she got to the fire place she gazed closer into the fire-place and saw the face of a little girl call ‘Annie’ who was also know as Annabel she wanted to show Annabel something so she grabbed Annabel’s hand and pulled her into the fire-place.

When her nanny noticed she was gone she looked into the fire-place and saw the face of Annabel looking back at her.

Annabel turned and noticed that she was not in the same house it was old and dirty then Annabel asked “were am I and who exactly are you” there was no reply, the girl who was once there was no longer Annabel turned her head around to see if she saw anything that reminded her in that strange place.

After investigating the house she went back over to the fire-place to see Annie in the arms of her nanny it brought a tear to her eye she was heartbroken and dead inside, Then Annabel realized what had happened the ghost of Annie pulled in Annabel to change over so she was in a paranormal world and Annie was in the real world.

It was dark and damp in the paranormal world it scared her then she heard a voice it was Annie.

She told Annabel “everything’s alright don’t worry I will switch back lives soon I just want to live in the normal world again”

Annabel then heard someone shouting for Annie so she stood up and wiped the dust of her dress and the tears form her eyes.

It was Annie’s best friend she walked up to her and said “Ann u been cryin ain’t ya wot up mate”

Annabel explained the whole thing and Annie’s friend Linda looked into the fire-place and saw Annie she started to cry.

After a year was over Annie wanted to go home back into the paranormal world she tried to reach into the fire place but she couldn’t go through Annabel then realised she wouldn’t be able to go back to her home, her loving grand-ma and her friends she fell to her knees and shouted out with anger.

Annabel’s grand-ma kept on hearing her voice so one day she went over to the fire-place and found poor little Annabel trapped in there so everyday since then her

Grand-ma would go and talk to Annabel and make her feel happy and not alone

THE END

smileysmileyHOPE YOU LIKED IT i did :)


Posted by Jax Burgoyne 24 Mar, 2010 12:18AM

This is a great story - amazing scenario and there's room for so much more. If you had time you could almost do episodic adventures of the two in their different worlds trying to get back. Or how each tries to fit in (or not) in their new world. Could you do more? I'd love to hear it! And what do your characters look like? Particularly the grand-ma. And the living room with the fireplace, and the new world that Annabel goes to?

Posted by Harley T. 19 Jan, 2010 03:29PM

so did i but my head was burning lol <3 you xxxxxsmileysmiley

Posted by Stephanie W. 19 Jan, 2010 03:28PM

i love ya story wish you did more smiley