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i heard

Anne D.Posted by Anne D. 09 Dec, 2009 08:48PM

i heard a bird sing a sweet song

i heard a fish bobbing along

i heard a peunguin flapping it's wings

i heard a goldsmith shining a ring

i heard an archer shoot into the sky

i heard a slob eating blueberry pie

Posted by Stephanie W. 19 Jan, 2010 03:52PM


Posted by Stephanie W. 19 Jan, 2010 03:49PM

very creative anne, love the bit about the slob eating blueberry pie

Posted by Jax Burgoyne 21 Dec, 2009 01:01PM

The rhythm of this is almost perfect - good stuff! I want more of it, however. Is there a story that this is the beginning of? What are you trying to say? I will accept a redraft of this poem instead of the writing you PROMISED you would do. Or that writing, OR biscuits to pay back the one you wrongly ate, and with interest too.