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paragragh 1 (heat wave)

Zoe GibsonPosted by Zoe Gibson 29 Jun, 2009 04:50PM

paragraph 1

The class was slouching and fanning themselves constantly; sweat dripping off their faces. Their eyes were losing focus; the cogs in the heads were no longer turning. Sound was just washing over them. The only sound audible to their ears was the dreaded burst of the school bell, symbolizing the start of break. A mixtures of moans and groans filled the gloomy atmosphere. Chairs sheeching on the reflective floor.


Posted by Alicia Beavis 29 Jun, 2009 10:12PM

Really like the description used here. Pretty damn awesome!

Posted by Leif Ahnland 29 Jun, 2009 07:27PM

Yeah, it works very well so far. Get us some more. Just a thought, maybe this is a class in the future when climate change summers make life in the librarian's "school" hard and they are trying to get a new system to function... Anyway, I like your language here, keep at it.

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Posted by Martin Oakshaft 29 Jun, 2009 06:06PM

very descriptive... i like it!