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A Kiss In The Rain

Alicia BeavisPosted by Alicia Beavis 22 May, 2009 08:42PM

Okay, so now we go into 'Alicia's random poems.' Haha! Yeah, i've never actually felt like this, just imagined,(I guess, in a way) which made me able to write it. I don't know why I did, but I did! Any feedback welcomed! Oh and yeah I know kinda a bit cheesy! But everyone has done it at least once.

Nothing compares to a kiss in the rain,
The only true thing that never fails to ease my pain,
Tears from the stormy skies,
Fall down into mine.

I look up to you perfectly beautiful face,
All the memories of us cloud my mind,
The times when life was a ferocious hurricane,
The confusion never leaving my world.

You smile, pure love surges through me,
Happiness consumes my soul,
My body trembles with feelings unknown,
Then our lips finally meet.

The clouds of darkness leave my world,
The precious sun brings life to me.
I pull away and look you in the eyes,
I know I can't live without you.

Nothing compares to a kiss in the rain,
Your the only true thing that never fails to ease my pain,
And when the next storm comes, it's time we start this all again.

Posted by Zoe Gibson 26 May, 2009 12:06PM

I love it and it really does give a good description of the experience. the line 'My body trembles with feelings unknown,' really... how do i say it i judt love this line, the word unknown there s just someing about that word.

Posted by Alicia Beavis 22 May, 2009 11:31PM

Yeah maybe! Thanks!

Posted by Martin Oakshaft 22 May, 2009 10:38PM

For someone who has never experienced that, its pretty accurate

.. sometimes cheesy is good, and its definitely a "feel good" poem.