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the silent writers story

Leo O.Posted by Leo O. 04 Oct, 2009 10:11AM

The Reason of the Beginning

Chapter One

Torc Aurora Oak was a pagan citizen in the village of Ecuomai. Now, Torc... everything was ordinary about him except one thing: he was a mage. Perhaps here you could give a few examples of how Torc is ordinary? You may think that was normal for a boy in that kind of world (You haven't yet said what kind of world it is, although there are things to suggest it's a fantasy world. But maybe - because you've got a great casual-sounding narrative voice here - you could say 'You don't know what kind of world it is? Well it's... Have you seen The Princess Bride? Like when Columbo makes comments on the story as he reads it. I love that!)but it wasn't. The pagan King Nuahda Mandala Chrysalis despised magic and banished any mage he could lay his hands on so Torc had to keep his powers secret.

It was a fine morning and Torc was walking to the market. As he was on his way he saw his friend Feather walking to the market too. He strolled towards her and as she saw him he saw [because it is through Torc's point of view] she hesitated wondering what to do. At last she fled. Torc was surprised - he and Feather had been friends for years.

As Torc was walking back he bumped into the King's guards. He fell, but just before he hit the ground he put his hands in front of him: he stopped in mid air. His heart pounded - if the guards had seen they would surely arrest him. "What you doin down ere this time of night, you should be at home my boy there are dangerous magids about." (Is this imagined speech or do they actually say it? I need to have more of the story so I can find out!) Torc had heard of magids in stories. His mother had told him they were supposed to be creatures of nightmare, sorcerers so powerful they could travel between worlds. ( please correct gramar mistaces )

MY BOOK COMING SOON

Leo O.Posted by Leo O. 03 Oct, 2009 03:24PM

THE REASON OF THE BEGGINING COMING SOON MY BOOK BY LEO OAKLEY LEIF IS DAT COOL HOPE IT IS HOPE IT IS GOOD AND YOU LIKE IT PEOPLE

me

Leo O.Posted by Leo O. 29 Sep, 2009 09:44AM
hello people i like you

soer

Leo O.Posted by Leo O. 28 Sep, 2009 08:02PM
ia have just had a shower i like writing story

HELP I'M A MAGE

Leo O.Posted by Robert O. 23 Apr, 2009 03:41PM

The bomb's ticking down, Cid and Zhainab are knocked out, Shanna's got a deep gash in her arm and my U.M.D illness is about to blow up.

in the grim, blood stained future, Ioshua's life is turned upside down when he is unmasked as a user of the arcane, with a bounty of unlimited credits on his head he'll have to form a clan and strike back. Alongside Shanna, Cid and Zhainab he'll restore the freedom of the magi and unmask the plot of the sinister company GreenTech.